Matt Bellamy

I like how you used repetition in this piece, I think it sounds really good. The narrator sounds like a really cold person 9well I suppose you would be, if ...

Oh! That was basically my reaction when I got to the end of the poem. I like how you lead the reader on and don't give any hint of what ...

Haha, this is pretty cool. It made me laugh, it's pleasingly short for my short attention span, and it makes a change from sad or serious poetry. I bet you ...

Aww, this is really cute. I can't actually remember the last time I read a poem that was written from the point of view of an animal. It's pretty amusing ...

I like this. I like how you compared the cycle of falling in and out of love to being reborn. It's a very simple poem, and you didn't need to ...

I really like this! Especially the second stanza, and what the sister says and how she looks while she's doing it. One thing I would say is that when you ...

Hey! You use description really well in this piece, I can imagine really clearly what you're talking about. I'm not sure why her freedom would mean your destruction, so I ...

I really like this. I like how you started in the present and then went back in time. Your rhyming is a bit simple in places but it doesn't sound ...

Wow. I love your writing style. You say things in such a unique way that I wouldn't expect. I really don't have anything to critique, your description is so beautiful ...

Haha, I like this. It really does lighten the mood and it's very cute and catchy. It does sound a little bit repetitive but that's just the style of the ...

Hi! This is good. I like how you compare the girl to plastic flowers, and the concept of not being really alive or dead. You use description really well in ...

Hey! This could be a great poem but it needs a bit of tweaking. I think the main problem is that some of it is worded awkwardly. It seems like ...

This is a sweet poem, very cute. However, you need to work on your grammar. Capitalise your I's, and there are places where you said then instead of than, quiet ...

Hey! I really like this, and mainly because I didn't expect the twist that you had killed your mother. I like the rhyming because it makes the poem sound cheerful, ...

Hi! I really like this. I love how you changed the mood towards the end, and I liked your rhyming. The rhyming could be better though, there are some places ...